Category: Writers Block
I once believed in you, but you were a lie
A lie that seemed divine.
So Solid, so pure
That Made me feel secure.
Where are those promises that you once claimed to keep?
I’ve realized you’re just a mere image that exists only in the feeble minds.
Nations and empires had fought in your name
What a shame.
people claim to seek for peace in the name of war.
Your texts are hollow
Your followers fight with one another to establish your truth
Is death the only proof?
Who are you? What are you? Nobody knows, nobody cares.
All I know is that I’m done with you.
Your brotherly love that emanates from your followers is disturbing.
Divided and blinded by your unknown identity,
They will rise to heaven to serve you or go to hell to pay for their disobedience
Either way, they lose.
Freedom that you preach is a trap to those who seek for liberty that is not in your offerings
You claim to give them freedom, but your condissions to serve you enslave them from reality.
Fear of death is their weakest point,
So you offer them resurrection.
I am not afraid to fall into the hands of the world of nothingness.
Your people claim to seek for peace in the name of war.
Your texts are hollow
Your followers fight with one another to establish your truth
Is death the only proof?
wow! Very deep! I myself think the opisite, but we all are different. Nice writing. Keep the writing up.
Nice writing, thanks for putting it out there!
Hope to see more.
sounds like your writing about a cult
No, not really. It's about religious institutions and the deity whom they fight for.
Hmm.
I thought you wrote about Prezbo and his corrupted policies or maybe George bush.
Nah, I try tnot to waste my energy on politicians who simply don't know how to handle power. Of course, people were stupid to trust George Bush in the first place.
I love this! I completely agree with it because I'm living it right now.